YAY.
I actually created this account at 12:00AM on March 5, 2007 EXACTLY.
But nnooo, Sheezyart didn't follow the internet time thing.
I ACTUALLY SYNCHRONIZED IT BEFORE I DID ALL THIS.
Oh well. 3:33's pretty cool too. =)
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Rant about "Poems"posted May 18th 2007, 3:09AM
Mood: About to EXPLODE!
I'm so tired of seeing all this random shit they call "poems" written by lame and angsty preteen and early teens on sA that get all these, "Wow! Wonderful poem!" comments.
Because they AREN'T wonderful poems.
They're utterly terrible.
I'm sorry I'm so frank, but I'm serious.
It's basically talking
In different
Lines like this
Talking about
All this random bullshit
About hurting and wanting to cut myself
And all that random bullshit ((LOL I RHYMED))
I'm actually one that's reluctant to critique and say mean things about other people's poems because it's from their hearts and everything, but all this bullshit I see is NOT from their hearts. If it is, their hearts are terribly shallow and stupid.
I'm not an amazing writer; I'm not an expert and English and literature, but even I know what a PROPER poem should be. POEMS are NOT bullshitting buckets of angst. A poem has a PURPOSE. A poem has a MESSAGE. A poem has DEPTH. A poem is NOT a bunch of cliches and bad grammar compiled by some angsty preteen about how fucking depressed they are because their heart is oh so sadly broken so they hide behind their greasy emo hair.
UWAH... I'm so confused. D:
It won't let me view my pagethingy.
&my avatar won't change
&I don't know how to make a layoutthingy
&the links and write-in-here boxes drop down and look all ugly. D:
I wanted to get da
but you were here soyeah.
but mhm. D:
...LOLYAY.
I finally get on Sheezy in the morning.
Socials exam I know I'll bomb tomorrow.
Anyhow.
I love how your comments are actually helpful. x3
Anyhow.
HELPHELPHELP. I DON'T UNDERSTAND PROPORTIONS AT ALL.
Or shape. Y'know, how you make everybody look so bloody natural.
Is it practice?
If so, Imma draw my nonexistant butt off once exams end. >D
I thought you'd be like
wtf imma go emo now
... x'D
But anyhow.
Yeah. I only studied for half an hour yesterday
and I still haven't looked at the essay
or memorized any dates
so I think I'm going to fail it more than you. c:
&yeah. I think it is practice. o__o